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📋 题目


🎯 题型分析

项目内容
题型Problem/Solution(问题解决类)
话题社会类 - 人口结构
关键词older people, increasing, problems, solutions
考察能力分析社会问题并提出可行解决方案

🔍 审题要点


📝 高分范文


📊 结构拆解

【开头段】
├── 背景:demographic ageing transforming societies
├── 原因:life expectancy ↑, birth rates ↓
├── 影响预告:unprecedented challenges
└── 结构预告:examine problems, propose solutions

【主体段1 - 问题】
├── 个人层面
│   ├── 健康:chronic diseases, dependence
│   ├── 孤独:outlive peers, children live far
│   └── 经济:insufficient savings
│
└── 社会层面
    ├── 养老金:pension schemes, solvent
    ├── 医疗:healthcare expenditure soars
    ├── 劳动力:shrinking, labour shortages
    └── 代际:intergenerational tensions

【主体段2 - 解决方案】
├── 政府政策
│   ├── 延迟退休
│   ├── 就业激励
│   ├── 再培训
│   └── 反歧视
├── 医疗转型:preventive, healthy ageing
├── 移民政策:offset labour shortages
├── 个人责任:save, social networks, active
└── 技术辅助:telemedicine, robots, assistive devices

【结尾段】
├── 总结挑战:healthcare, pensions, labour, wellbeing
├── 列举应对:policy, technology, healthcare, individual
└── 升华:add years to life → add life to years

✨ 语言亮点

高分词汇

词汇/短语含义用法示例
demographic ageing人口老龄化demographic ageing is transforming
life expectancy预期寿命as life expectancy rises
chronic diseases慢性病chronic diseases become increasingly common
social isolation社会隔离loneliness and social isolation
remain solvent保持偿付能力struggle to remain solvent
labour shortages劳动力短缺leading to labour shortages
intergenerational tensions代际紧张intergenerational tensions over resources
preventive care预防性医疗shift emphasis toward preventive care
telemedicine远程医疗telemedicine brings healthcare to isolated elderly
assistive devices辅助设备assistive devices support independent living

高分句型


🔄 可迁移表达

这些表达可以用于其他社会问题话题:

原句可迁移到
"strains public systems in multiple ways"医疗、教育、福利系统压力
"the ratio of X to Y grows"任何比例变化的讨论
"coordinated action on multiple fronts"需要综合方案的话题
"shift emphasis toward prevention"医疗、犯罪、环境话题
"add life to years, not just years to life"健康、幸福、教育话题

💭 思考延伸


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